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    Post  Bingofuel Tue Jun 08, 2010 3:45 pm

    Character Name: Mabu Uremu

    Elements: Wind

    Character Age: 24
    Gender: Male
    Village: Sand
    Appearance
    Height - 179cm
    Weight - 62 kg
    Hair - Brown
    Eyes - Black.
    Body Build – Normal, Not to muscled.. mostly takes advantage of his speed.
    Clothing: Uiremu wears a Grey pullover with a white shirt. His pants is blue in color (Simple clothing). On his feet he wears the traditional shinobi sandals when he goes on a mission, otherwise he walks on his bare feet.

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    Post  Kisai Wed Jun 09, 2010 1:23 pm

    I like the way you mixed electric eels and iron sand jutsu... Could make some nice combos in the future but don't eels need water to live?

    Also PM me if you want a better char pic... no offense but yours is well... ok but not sexy...
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    Post  Akane Wed Jun 09, 2010 2:44 pm

    Im not approving this.

    Eels within the earth? not acceptable. They are water creatures. Plus trying to get kirin out of it wont happen.
    You are iron sand yet you are using normal sand jutsu? Not happening either.

    I however do not mind your personality since i understand its not the easiest thing to describe.
    Getting a better picture may be appropriate but if you want to keep that one you will need to be more descriptive of his appearance.
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    Post  Hatsu Wed Jun 09, 2010 3:23 pm

    Change the eels into snakes, that will make more sense. And relax, you wont be similar to Orochimaru! Razz
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    Post  Bingofuel Wed Jun 09, 2010 3:36 pm

    Okay Thanks for the suggestions and help..
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    Post  Bingofuel Thu Jun 10, 2010 4:55 pm

    -Edited Look above-


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    Post  Alucard Fri Jun 11, 2010 2:41 pm

    I approve of this simply for the lulz & for being a wall of text.
    If I get banned, I blame you William.
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    Post  Kenji Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:36 am

    I'm Not approving this because in my opinion the Story is only Jounin standard. Maybe not even that. And also your Jutsu * Kaiten Gakuri [Wind/Kekkei genkai ] <- Like rasengan ? You also never included how you learned this in the story, Since there were never any other Kage's or naruto Rasengan doesn't exist. So i'd say sort these out and expand your story.
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    Post  Bingofuel Tue Jun 15, 2010 9:57 am

    1. Akane needs to approve it...
    2. It isn't a rasengan... Its just a melee jutsu where Mabu uses his wind element fused with his iron sand element where he creates some sort of ball made of flying particles in his hand.. And I already know Im the first tsuchikage Suspect
    3. And yes my story needs to be expanded a bit..
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    Post  Kenji Tue Jun 15, 2010 10:28 am

    Kage's can approve too if i am not mistaken. And what i meant about the jutsu is that you never included in the story how you learned it and if you have a new jutsu that you made up you must post it in the Jutsu thread.
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    Post  Kaiden Tue Jun 15, 2010 5:28 pm

    Actually we're not using the jutsu thread yet. We're just approving made up jutsu on the applications for now in order to expediate the process.
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    Post  Ell Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:30 pm

    Noooot hokage material. add more, clean up your grammar, ect.
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    Post  Kenji Thu Jun 17, 2010 3:11 pm

    Even though your opinion counts Ell you can't really say whether it isn't or is Kage material.
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    Post  Teashi Thu Jun 17, 2010 3:16 pm

    Sure he can, he can't approve it, but he can give tips and pointers, etc.
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    Post  Kenji Thu Jun 17, 2010 4:52 pm

    Well that's what i meant.
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    Post  Bingofuel Mon Jun 28, 2010 6:05 am

    Well Im going on vacation for 2weeks!! So I won't be online and can't RP..
    -Bingo out-
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    Post  Kago Mon Jun 28, 2010 4:55 pm

    You changed to Jounin?

    No longer Tsuchikage?
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    Post  Kisai Mon Jun 28, 2010 5:03 pm

    He said its to difficult...

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